Around the back, saplings have sprouted, some growing up through the floor and out through the shutters. She isn’t sure if they are trying to break in or to escape.
‘Better the place is bulldozed, forgotten,’ Vişinel says.
‘We grew up here,’ she says.
‘And spent the whole time trying to get out.’ He kicks some litter. ‘I don’t know why we’ve come back.’
She remembers the rows of iron cots, the thin blankets, the years she could only speak Romanian.
‘I’ve bought it,’ she says. ‘The building. I’m going to make it whole again.’
They both know she means us, not it.
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This is a 100-word or so Friday Fictioneer story, inspired by the picture. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields hosts the Friday Fictioneers, posting a picture each week (this week supplied by J Hardy Carroll). Click here to read other people’s and click here to join in.
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My story this week might require some explanation. Decree 770 was a 1966 Romanian law which restricted abortion and contraception, which led ultimately to many children being placed in state orphanages where they were forced to live under terrible conditions.
Excellent. The last line puts the rest in perspective. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Great last line. I hope she’s not planning to restore the building as an orphanage
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I don’t think so. Thanks, Neil.
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Dear Claire,
Although the story made sense to me, the little bit of clarification brought it into focus. Vivid visual and the last line delivers a punch.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
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Excellent!
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Thanks Trish
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Lots of stuff in there. Character action as well. Super work.
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Thank you!
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I got it without the explanation… happy that they were among the few that made it to a better world. So many of Romanian poor are on our streets begging today. Maybe it could be a place for them as well.
I also remember the pictures coming from Romania with the orphanages…
A question: Shouldn’t it be bulldozed rather than bullbozed?
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Thanks, Bjorn. And yes, well spotted typo!
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As was previously mentioned, the last line really brought the story together. Well told in such a short space. Great job, Claire.
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Thanks, glad you liked it.
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I think we’re going to see a lot of orphanages this week. Nicely done Claire.
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I’ve still yet to read other people’s. I’m a bit late this week. Thanks Sandra.
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http://www.theguardian.com/news/2014/dec/10/-sp-ceausescus-children
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I thought this was adorable..restoring more than just a building.
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Excellent, Claire – that last line was like a punch in the stomach!
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Thanks Susan.
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Such a feeling of light out of the darkness. Well told 🙂
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Thanks Helen.
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She’s got a mountain to climb I think.
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I think you’re right.
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Well told, well done
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Thanks!
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Heart breaking. Your approach to this real life tragedy is most poignant, and effectively portrays the evil of such policies. We seem of late to be hearing about so many crimes against children – not so long ago and not so far away. What is wrong with us?
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Hard to believe it was so recent and still goes on. Thanks Margaret.
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What a brilliant, powerful story – so succinclty and expertly told. Touching and beautiful
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Thanks Lynn. Glad you liked it.
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Excellent, I remember the horrific pictures of the Romanian orphans. You’ve done a great descriptive job with the iron cots and thin blankets.
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Hard in 100 words to get across so much suffering. But, thanks!
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A heartbreaking story, well told.
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Thanks!
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Beautifully written, emotions pour out of every word.
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Thank you!
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Excellent – an ending with hope rather than hate.
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Hadn’t heard of decree 770 – abortion and contraception. Crazy!
So many damaged lives – but you end with hope.
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I had to include a little ray in there. Thanks!
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I hope they find some healing. Great story.
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Thanks Tracey
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I love this story, Claire! Very beautiful, very moving, and ultimately, very uplifting.
And I think you meant “bulldozed,” not ” bullbozed.” 🙂
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Ah, yes. Well spotted. Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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I learned something here. I had read of, and seen, conditions in the orphanages, with the children’s lack of human contact leading to “failure to thrive” syndrome. But I did not know of the Decree; it explains a lot.
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I only learnt about it researching this story. It does explain much. Thanks Jan.
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I can see why she might try to restore it if it gave her some sense of wholeness. I love the name Vişinel. Is that Romanian? Nice piece, Claire.
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Thanks Amy. Yes, that name is Romanian
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Too sad!
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Thanks, Dawn
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Great story line!
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Thank you!
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human tragedies never end, only time and space change
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Seems like both are survivors and I like how it ends with hope for a better future.
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Thank you!
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Reading your notes at the end reminded me of those terrible post Ceausescu early years when the full horror of those orphanages was exposed in our daily papers. Good angle on the prompt and nicely finished. 🙂
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This is my kind of fiction. Individuals battling in a dark place, but resolved to make it better.
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Thanks Hilary
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