In a box labelled Images d’Épinal, Eva found a flat paper model called Statue De La Libertè. It took her three evenings to meticulously cut around each shape, fold every tab, and stick them together. There were little family groups to attach to the edge: a plump man with a young son gazing upwards, a woman with two children, a mother holding a baby.
When it was finished, Eva imagined herself part of that tiny perfect world; and chose to ignore the too-bright colours, the fixed smiles on the faces, and deliberately forgot that it was all made of card.
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This is a 100-word flash fiction story inspired by the picture. It’s part of the Friday Fictioneers group, where our hostess, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields gives us a picture to write to, this week supplied by Lucy Fridkin. Click here to join in, or here to read other people’s.
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Images d’Épinal were originally stylised and brightly coloured designs developed by a
Frenchman in the town of Épinal. The phrase is now used for something that is so perfect and happy that it is unreal, a chocolate-box image as we might say in England. I’d be interested to know what idioms fellow Friday Fictioneers use for this phrase around the world.
I didn’t know that. I like it when I learn some thing from a story. I guess the other word we might use is “Disney”
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Oh, and I didn’t know that Disney could be used in that way. It’s only a literal word for me. Thanks!
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A beautiful take on the prompt, nicely done.
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Thanks Iain.
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This is superbly written and heart-rendingly sad.
I bleed for Eva.
We might say something like that is ‘Pure Brigadoon’, where pure means extremely or excessively.
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Thank you. I’ve never heard of that expression. Interesting.
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There is so much that is not told, yet you tell so much of her emotions… brilliant work.
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Thanks so much Bjorn.
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Beautifully crafted as always
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Thank you!
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I just love the way you write, Claire. This was so picture perfect… (sorry… couldn’t resist)
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Claire, that was beautiful.
I’m Australian. We have a few phrases which might fit. “Living in fairyland”, “OTT or over the top”. There’s also a line from an iconic Australian movie called: “The Castle”…”Them ‘im he’s dreamin'” and another line: “That’s one for the pool room.” (meaning something special.)
Another Australian phrase you might find interesting is: “Not happy, Jan”. This line comes from an ad a few years ago: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2akt3P8ltLM
Funny how phrases take off and become part of the general lexicon!
xx Rowena
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Thanks Rowena. These expressions are all really interesting. The only one I’ve ever heard of is OTT.
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Dear Claire,
Beyond the ‘story’, which is complete and whole in and of itself, the realism and mood your words convey is masterful. The is very hard to accomplish and yet each week, this one no exception, you show that you respect your readers by weaving with skill and craft and care a tapestry of life in miniature. Thank you.
As to idiom for Espinal, I can think of none to fit your search but am enjoying reading the comments.
Yours,
Doug
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Thanks Doug. Your comments are always so thoughtful.
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Dear Claire,
Having been a child who lived in a dream world of drawings and telling herself stories to survive, I didn’t really put a name to it until later. “La La Land” is one term and “Fantasy Island” another. (thanks to the television program. In the end, those dreamy children might grow up to be artists and authors. Lovely, evocative story that gave me pause. Well written as always.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Those are good words. Thanks so much Rochelle
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I thought this was great for its melancholy and loneliness. The three evenings alone cutting and pasting and then the desperate dive into the perfect world, ignoring, because it’s unbearable not to, that it’s made of card. Great piece.
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Very emotional story – I’m wondering why she wants to wish herself away, why she wants to be in the tiny model instead of her life. Lovely miniature tale, Claire
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I used to love making cardboard models theat I designed myself, and I too imagined myself living inside them.
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Made me wonder what her world REALLY was like because it must be a real bummer of an existence.
Again, Claire, amazing narrative and great story telling! 🙂
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Oh my heart!
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There is a strange emotion in this one, a joy and sadness at the same time. Well written Claire!
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Thanks Laurie.
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Wonderful! I remember having similar paper puzzle toys when young. So much fun they were.
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Yes, I had those paper dolls that you could dress with paper clothes. I played with them so much their heads fell off.
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Exactly, and when the heads did fall off we made new ones cut out of one of those huge catalogs from Sears or JC Penny.
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Hmm, I think it is possible to regard this as an (almost) upbeat story, because the power of imagination takes her to a positive place and I bet those hours spent assembling the images were happy ones.
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Thanks Hilary. Upbeat story with downbeat tones perhaps!
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Another great story, Claire. Poor girl. A fairy tale existence is what I’d call something too perfect. Before Barbie, we had paper dolls with their lovely clothes. I loved those. There were so many different kinds. Good writing as usual. 🙂 — Suzanne
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There is a very sad tone to this story. I felt the girl’s loneliness and longing for a better place.
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I love how this revs up my imagination!
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Thanks Dawn!
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A delightful take on the prompt, Claire. I had no idea they made “paper doll” books like that.
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Neither did I until I started thinking about a creative way to use the prompt.
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This is very beautifully written. To answer your question: I don’t know of any phrase that is used. But, I love to use the phrase ‘magical fantasy’ when something is perfect and happy. Life has too many pitfalls to be perfect and happy. This is a touching writing that leaves one thinking and even hoping for more.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks so much Isadora. Magical fantasy is a great phrase.
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I’m pleased you think it’s great. 😎
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I’m tempted to draw a comparison between escaping to a perfect cut-out world and escaping into fiction, but of course the analogy is limited. One can escape into fictional worlds which may not be perfect, but still satisfies. Your story captures the situation beautifully. As regards the word hunt – my husband and I use ‘Stepford’ for such situations, after the old movie ‘Stepford Wives’, where women were replaced with doubles who would be perfect, compliant adornments for their husbands, and the whole town was a model of harmony and conformity. It was a creepy movie.
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Oh, yes, Stepford is the perfect word to describe this. Something that looks perfect but isn’t. I’d forgotten all about that film, I watched it years ago and loved it.
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How lonely!
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Yes, it is rather.
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The subtle details of this one are haunting, Claire. It’s easy to imagine a number of reasons for this child’s experience, and that makes the reading that much richer.
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Thanks Dawn.
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